I’m working on my second of the Fidelian Knights space series. I wrote the first book for my now twelve year-old “goddaughter”. We were talking about my new story, AVALON ONE. She said I needed to allow someone to die in this book. She reminded me that at least one other person suggested this as well.
It’s hard when you control your own book from start to finish, but we still need to listen to those who are reading the story. I can guarentee someone will die in the story, but that’s as far as the spoiler goes.